Terran

Not really sure what to say about that Blackcrowe

A quote for you; you can put it on the cover of the book once its released if you like*.

"The Chronicles of Daisy Mae stand as one of the most entertaining debut works of fiction since Rokmokkara's How I've Already Killed Everything....Twice"
Blackcrowe

*Endorsment fees apply.

"Oh...I hope I'm not marrying this guy with this gesture... she thinks."

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

Heh, I thought about having a handful of peanuts, then changed my mind. I don't want to choke on it laughing, while reading an unexpected thought of hers. :-)

As requested, then: yes I like - of course I like. It's entertaining. I have sympathy or a liking for unsure-of-themselves-and-their-surroundings, self-questioning types. 'I don't know whyyy...' Heh. She's fun and funny. Where does she get that from? Her 'daddy?' :-)

Just watch out for those tense shifts, especially within the same sentence - they can creep up on you when you're not looking. Like 'she downs a mug of ale, then swiftly kicked the impertinent lout who fondled her squarely in the groin, apologises to the other patrons of the establishment, and walked out of the common room, smiling angelically.'

Um, well... no, not an actual quote, no... Me having fun, never no mind... :-)

(Oh, and some of the colours chosen for text - some of them are tricky-faint against the forum skin - at least for lil ole moi - like this, in the extreme: HAHAHA! See? ;-))

I'm enjoying the Chronicles of Daisy Mae so far. Is she going to meet a handsome boy named Abner at some point? ;-)

Welcome!!!